A nice poem, but it didn't really appeal to me much. I liked the beginning of the poem, but lost interest after that.
"The beauty of the rainbow is made of colors,
but your beauty was made up of undefined colors."
Since the rest of the poem is in present tense, I suggest you change that 'was' to 'is'. Also, I think you shouldn't use colors again in the second line, maybe you can change it to something else, saying that the beauty of the rainbow is made up of colours but her beauty is made up of a lot more.
Just my opinion.
Keep reading and writing,
~Red.



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