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 Happy Birthday to Writing.com Open in new Window. [E]
A small Pantoum poem that wishes Writing.com a Happy Birthday in a special way.
by Dorianne Author Icon
Review by abbyer Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*RainbowL**RainbowR*Hello, Dorianne . I found your poem "Happy Birthday Writing.com" for 14th wdc birthday sr mod challenge . I would like to leave you some comments, which are not professional, just my personal opinion. Feel free to ignore anything you don't find useful.
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Review of "Happy Birthday Writing.com"


*ConfettiY**ConfettiY**ConfettiY*Theme of the poem The theme of the poem is wdc's birthday. Very appropriate for the time we are now going through. You managed to connect birthday, which is a joyful event, with writing, which for all of us here is joyful, too. So, it doesn' t seem as a disconnected event, but as it is what connects us all. *BalloonO* *BalloonG* *BalloonY*



*ConfettiB**ConfettiB**ConfettiB* Impressions
So far, I have only read pantoums that are dark and emotional, and it always left me in awe. It is the first time that I read a pantoum in a lighter and happy tone and I really appreciated it, I still admire the poets that are able to describe so much emotion with only repetitive lines. It was a pleasant surprise that I enjoyed greatly. *BalloonP* *BalloonB* *BalloonV*

Keep writing. Best wishes,

Susan *RainbowL**RainbowR*

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