Hello, ♥HOOves♥

I'm reviewing "♥Streets of Dingle♥"  as part of "WDC 14th Birthday Sr. Mod. Challenge" . I have also abandoned my usual reviewing template for something a bit more festive for this birthday week.

I'm pretty new at reviewing poetry , so please forgive the lack of technical terms . . . and pretty much every other strange thing that comes out of my mouth

Rhyme: It seems you're going for an "ABCB" style. There was one section where it didn't quite match - Crib/live. However, I think it's pretty hard to come up with a pure rhyme to Crib and you got as close as humanly possible.

Syllables: I think this is called "meter"...maybe (I looked it up on a site). I noticed the lines varied between 6-8 syllables. Was this intentional? I only mention it because (to me) it put of the flow slightly.

Suggestions:

No big things I can offer. Maybe looking into the meter, but I don't think it's a deal breaker at all.

All in all, I really liked this poem. I will be traveling through Europe in a couple years. I may have to walk the same steps as this poem!


Final thoughts:

** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Bob the Birthday Warm Fuzzy hopes you have a great WdC birthday week!

Have a great day and write on!
Robyn


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .