Hello, goldenautumn!

I'm reviewing "Invalid Item"  as part of "WDC 14th Birthday Sr. Mod. Challenge" . I have also abandoned my usual reviewing template for something a bit more festive for this birthday week.

Plot: A letter about delivering a delivery zombie boy.

Characters: Tribbles! I knew it! I thought of that just before reading the last line. Woohoo! I do like your zombie boy and his description. It's also a very cute gift you decided to give to Mary Ann. Do you really get to drive a police car? Cool! My mum let me drive her school bus once.

Suggestions:

To "modernize" the idea, you could considering changing the letter to text messages, that way the real life updates would be more believable {e:bigsmile)

{e:CakeP} Final thoughts: What happens when you bath a tribble? Is it like a gremlin?

** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Bob the Birthday Warm Fuzzy wishes you a happy WdC birthday week!

Have a great day and write on!
Robyn


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .