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by the light of fourteen candles: a terzanelle
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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This is a very interesting poem!

What I liked:
I liked the rhyming that you had going on, I thought it was very creative.
I also liked the repetition of some of the lines, it sounded very lyrical.

This poem has the feel of song lyrics to me. I thoroughly enjoyed it, good job!

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