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Hi Rain and Shadows

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Watch the Fireworks with Me.

First Impression: A very sweet tale of young adults spending time together.

What I liked: The author led us gently through the experience, Aidan shared with Min. It was very engaging to follow the young people's experience.

What needs your attention: Nothing, you did an excellent job. Though, I do not understand Hyung in the beginning and then the rest of the story is Aidan.

Favorite Parts: Aidan oversleeping and then wanting his dad to bring him to school. That is so typical of teenagers. My own children did that quite frequently as well.

Overall Impression: Simple story of youth that reminds us all of our early experiences with the opposite sex. It is well written and very refreshing.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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