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Given: Sep 3, 2014 at 6:59am
Length: 587 Characters |
587 w/o WritingML
I love short poetry, but this seems incomplete. Perhaps you meant to save it as a draft and work on it later? If you wish to add more to this then you shouldn't make it public till it is complete. I see you are new to WDC, so if you need any help with the technicalities, do let me know.
The three lines that you have written are wgood and hold the promise of a wonderful poem if extended. There are no grammatical errors either. The title is very apt too. I love free verse poetry so I look forward to reading this if you do decide to add more to it.
Keep reading and writing,
~Red.
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