Good expression of characters and conversation between son and father. Speaking in 1st person can be challenging but I think you did it very well. Nice work on developing the characters and their thoughts/feelings.

To help make it more readable considering using double spacing between paragraphs. And separate out the conversations into their own paragraph.

I did notice what appears to be an inconsistency, the opening speaks of the fathers death, however in the end he seems to still be alive. Perhaps I missed something?

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