The story follows the prompt very well. The ending seemed kind of rushed. I like that the aunt and her niece were reunited. It's hard to be a rebel by yourself. There were some sentences in the piece that did not flow very smoothly.

"If only she could know for sure, she had premonitions usually about death, she could tell someone was about to die but not always who or how, and she was unable to warn them."

Also the word "had" appears a lot, and can take the reader out of the story.

Overall, it is a good story with potential.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .