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 | My Life as a Closeted Insane Person  [13+] A glimpse inside the life and mind of a consistently embarrassed and clueless person.  |
| (3.5)  Hi There! It is me ~LifeLessons~ I am visiting New stories from review a Newbie and came across this piece. I was taken by the title of course and the brief description.  First Impressions I found this story quite interesting and I totally agree that people have this grand idea of what is acceptable in society. They love to point fingers and judge. People are cruel and without knowing facts they laugh. I really felt bad for this character in the story. Depression is a serious illness and needs to be handled with care. It is now the most disturbing mental illness through out the country. Everyone deals with it differently and coping skills are not the same for everyone. Reading that the character loves to write and prefers to stay out of the lime light of the corporal ladder is not surprising. Staying alone in their space is more comforting that being judged in the public eye.  Overall Thoughts I believe you wrote a story of truth and feelings that the character wears on his sleeve. You did a great job in getting across a point from inside the characters head. I felt for him and agreed with him on all levels. There is no such thing as a freak flag I believe it would be more of a "being comfortable in your own skin" Thank you for sharing this story and I hope you enjoy the site and all it has to offer. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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