Hi Amber -- As requested, the review will follow the five questions you have above.

1) Grammar & Spelling; In the first paragraph "its demands" I think should be its'. I didn't notice any other spelling errors. For grammar you may want to revisit the use of comma's. I noticed quite a few in each sentence so you may find they are overused.

2) Length seems to appropriate. Personally I like shorter Prologue's, keep in mind it is a preference so other reviews may say otherwise.

3) Amount of information; Overall was good, just the one suggestion, see #4, there seemed to be a big leap from the letter to current events.

4) Timing; Overall the timing and flow is good. The break from after the father's letter to current events could use more depth. Perhaps spend sometime describing how she felt after she read the letter, give that moment more life so we can get more acquainted with her character.

5) Interest; Was very high, I like the story line and plot. The idea of the dagger and dragon's soul is intriguing, it does make you want to know more.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .