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*Candleg* Happy Birthday WDC! *Candleg*


*Cupcakeo* This is a beautiful poem. I love the form you used and the rhymes that helped the poem flow from beginning to end. It flowed so well that it practically rolled off my tongue when I read it. It had a nice steady pace too. *Thumbsup*

*Cupcakeo* The picture you painted was so serene I couldn't help but feel calm as I read your poem. It's such a positive message too, something I would love to wake up to every morning.

*Cupcakeo* I loved this line *Heart*:

...As Morning waves "Goodbye" to Night...

Keep writing! *Pen*

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