Well I'll admit you had me up until the end, but then again, that was the point. Was he telling the truth or just kidding around? Either way the story was interesting and did have good dialog between the two main characters. The description of the park and the gloomy day was a nice way to pull your readers into the story. Making the animal a pig was clever, it added to the humor of the story.

Overall, nicely done and I have to say; I'm cheering for the pig !!!



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