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First Thoughts

I am reviewing "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. as part of "WDC 14th Birthday Sr. Mod. Challenge" Open in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with The Lord's creative angel messengers. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked

This is my favorite phrase because it states a truth that many of us forget.
every historical accomplishment represents a new beginning for somebody

Suggestions For Improvement

This phrase, And, I have a, is missing an opening quotation mark. I suggest placing a quotation mare before And.

Final Thoughts

I enjoyed reading this inspiring story because it caused me to think about how may accomplishments contribute to humanity's accomplishments. Write on.

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