Initial hook and title: Hey there! Just thought I'd stop by with a review of this for you.

What I liked:

I'm not a very good poet myself and don't write a lot because I find it hard to understand the different forms, but I think you've done a really good job with this piece.

You have told the reader juts what snowball fights mean to you and you have painted a winter wonderland scene for me as I read it that makes me smile.

Thank you for sharing this with me and good luck for other things you write!



Hope this helped!