Initial hook and title: Hey Joy! I spotted your contest and noticed it was a new addition and wanted to stop by with a review!


What I liked:

This contest is being run in honour of Writing.com's 14th birthday celebrations and is a debut (I think!) The idea of the contest is simple, to write a short piece of flash fiction from the prompt you have provided.

The rules are set out really well and they are clear throughout. I really like that you've asked for certain themes and characteristics to show up in the story, it means the writer will really have to think about how to include all three in such a short space.

The page is set out well and though simple, I think it works well and I like it. There isn't too much fuss and the picture you have used at the beginning is really original.

Great idea for a contest!





Hope this helped!