Initial hook and title: Hey! I'm here to read the poem you submitted to "The Writer's Cramp" 


What I liked:

Now I'll openly admit I'm not much of a poet, though I do give it a go from time to time and I almost closed this down but I'm so glad I got to reading. Something about this poem really drew me in.

I think the really interesting part of this was the fact that you ended up going along for the ride with the character of a book and I think as writers, we can relate to wanting to be able to tell such a story for our readers. You really draw the reader into the story too and have them experience it as you do as well as taking them along for the journey to see things that happen and how it all works out.

The rhyming all works out really well and flows naturally too. I have to say that I don't know the original poem that this is inspired by but it sure makes me want to read it. Good job and thanks for sharing!





Hope this helped!