Hi ElaineElaine . It's 💙 Carly - aka Joan Watson doing a raid of your portfolio for the 30 Day Blogging Challenge. As I am getting started late on this I am choosing smaller pieces. I chose your poem "Lifted high" /

I liked the title and the descriptive line - being transformed by an ancient dragon. Very intriguing so I had to have a closer look and read. I am glad I did. I really liked the rhyming pattern you held to - my only trip up was on the line "to a place of pure love where you me hold." I kept wanting to read it as 'where you behold'. Other than than the poem flowed well and captured me.

I loved the repetition of the line ''Take me away, oh dragon of old." You craft your poem using beautiful words - like courage and eternity's mold.

Thank you for sharing your piece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .