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Given: Aug 11, 2014 at 11:01pm
Length: 1,069 Characters |
932 w/o WritingML
I am reviewing your work as a member of the 30
Day Bloggers Group
I believe it is a privilege to read another's work. Nothing written in this review is intended to offend or upset in any way, and is my own personal opinion.
Impressions
A stream of fast delivered statements, like a verbal demo.
Style
I like the receptive sentences that give the poem rhythm. Also it makes the opinions soumd definite
and forceful.
Descriptions I particularly liked
no television...no radio...
no communism...no place like home...
Overall
It a reminder that life is what is close to home, because when it comes down to it
that's what effects you most. Conversely today the threat of not having it, or the fear of change can make people unwilling to be aware of the rest of he world and the people In it.
This poem reminds me to appreciate both points of view.
Fin
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