Hi Carly...I don't review very often so forgive me for not having a template. I'm just going off snap judgments.

I was drawn to this piece because I prefer to read poetry, and I tend to sleep poorly with lots of nightmares. I know...a strange concoction.

I'm no authority...I'm just sharing what I think. My personal opinion is that if you're gonna use punctuation, use it consistently. I'm also not a fan of capitalizing every line, especially when they fall in the middle of a sentence.

That said, I really liked this, especially "Only I can break the spell. Only I can           Awake." Powerful, and an excellent example of ownership toward the situation.

Thank you for taking part in the 2014 Summer Camp blogging challenge, and for being a member in our blogging community.

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