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Title: Every title of a piece is so important. It is the one that can captivate a reader. The title should have a magnetic charm that can allure a reader,because it is the first thing in which a reader have their first glance and have their first impression before going to the body of the piece.

The given title of your piece enticed me to read it, I like the combination of the two words- it tells about biography- and I always intrigue to see and read about portrait, to know about the one that was portrayed; its personality, we do have different personality, and its so amazing on how we are different. I have a self portrait too but I portrayed it as an image.

Imagery - a well crafted words and if properly used can create a subtle or vivid in imagery.
The proper chosen of words to express or to show the meaning of the piece can create a well balance imagery that evokes tone and emotions.

The words you weaved is good, and vivid. Somehow its in depth, but poetry are really in-depth isn't it, and create different meanings to the reader, whether it was in the literal or metaphorical.
That's what I see in your piece.

Rhyme,Rhythm and Form: This is one also of the important part of a piece. Rhyme when it was properly been used it can be pleasing to the ear when it read aloud and it's fun to create, and the rhythm and even line breaks can stimulate emotions and will set the imagery presented.

This is not a rhyming poetry, but I liked the rhythm created and line breaks, it blends with the tone.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow*ThumbsUp*
and no doubt arise.

*Thought2* MY FINAL REFLECTION :
They say "what we think in our self, is what we are."

Thank you for sharing your piece, I enjoyed reading and reviewing it.
Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Everyone have its own gift and talent,
God made us unique.
Its within us, if we want to improve and share.
So write on,*Pencil*
and always share this wonderful talent you have.

Until next time.*Heart*

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