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Hello and good afternoon. My name is Jessica and I'll be reviewing Media Love for SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP. Please remember these are only my opinions; feel free to use whatever opinions are helpful!

First Impressions:
Ah, yes, I remember when I first started writing haiku! I used to write about non-nature things all the time. However, most traditional haiku are about nature. You might want to read up on modern haiku or another form called renga  Open in new Window..

Overall Thoughts:
This is a good start and this is a great introduction to learning about haiku. You follow the form well and capture the essence of the media in such a short amount of space. I thought it worked, however, I feel like it could get even more philosophical. This is where a renga or multiple haiku (modern) might work the best because this could be a whole philosophical debate.

Rating:
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Final Thoughts:
Again, not a bad start! If you are interested, you can read about the haiku form from the poetry foundation  Open in new Window.. Keep experimenting and write on!



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