Hello and good afternoon ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy . I hope you're having a wonderful day. I will be reviewing Even God Cannot Forgive for RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group. Please remember these are only my opinions and feel free to use whatever.

First Impressions:
This is AMAZING and BEAUTIFUL! As someone who studies wars, especially the Civil War, you hit the nail right on the head. It's often an ugly time and one has to wonder why it all starts;it's a great philosophical question that is worth exploring and you do so in Even God Cannot Forgive. I also really like the rhythm and flow - very creative!

Overall Thoughts:
I like the philosophy behind this piece, especially in the note you leave in the bottom... war can't be forgotten and either side is hard to forgive. I just think about the aftermaths of all wars and problems they sometimes do not solve. Anyway, I thought the way you portrayed this message to be interesting. I love the rhyme scheme and I like the free flow of this because it allows us to feel what war causes. It's very visceral and gets us thinking. I found no mechanical errors, however, it wouldn't hurt to proofread to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.

Rating:
* * * *

Final Thoughts:
Keep up the good work and write on! Have a beautiful day and weekend!