Hello and good afternoon. My name is Jessica and I'll be reviewing Mom for SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP. Please remember these are only my opinions, take what you need and if you have questions, please don't hesitate to contact me.

First Impressions:
This is a simple, yet effective poem. Though it is simply stated, it packs a lot of emotion and gratitude to your mother. I think this would make for a great greeting card.

Overall Thoughts:
I like the way Mom is in free verse form. With the title, I was expecting the AABB rhyme scheme, but I definitely like the free verse. Also, I would check spacing... single space would look better and of course capitalization... not every beginning has to be capitalized, but Word is good at that. Other than that, I found no mechanical errors, however it wouldn't hurt to go back to proofread to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.

Rating:
***

Final Thoughts:
Keep up the good work and write on!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .