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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the king. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the interaction between the king and the queen.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this is an exciting and well planned story. Write on.

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