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 21st Century Contrition Open in new Window. [E]
Do you know that the honeybees are disappearing?
by Dan Sturn Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza of this poem establishes the mood, rhythm, rhyme scheme, and hooks the reader. The rhythm carries the plot forward from stanza to stanza while revealing a beautiful picture of a honey bee working.

What I liked: My favorite stanza is the last because it reveals the change in the speakers actions and beliefs about the honey bee.

Final Thoughts: This is a thought provoking poem. Write on.

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