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First Thoughts: The first sentence hooked me, I wanted to know why Tom did not like his present. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the description of the Goo Ball because it was visual and well-written. I also like the twist at the end.

Final Thoughts: This is an intriguing story. Write on.

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