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 I am a suicide survivor Open in new Window. [13+]
Pushed to attempt suicide - and surviving
by cmmacneil Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: The title of this article was the hook that drew me into the essay. A typo in this phrase, They why's, I suggest changing They to The.

What I liked: I like the description of the realization while sitting on steps drinking coffee.

Final Thoughts: This is a thought provoking and inspiring essay. Write on.

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