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 A Holiday Adventure Open in new Window. [13+]
Aliens visit earth, with unexpected results.
by J. A. Buxton Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the space craft and the blue world. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The response of the aliens and their perception of the planet.

Final Thoughts: A good twist at the end. I enjoyed reading this story. Write on.

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