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 A Lasting Spirit or Guilt Open in new Window. [E]
A prose poem about Obama's re-election bid succeeding - an honest, yet eloquent viewpoint.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first stanza establish the rhythm of this poem. The rhythm is that of ordinary speech and flows smoothly from stanza to stanza. Each stanza makes a specific point and builds on the last stanza.

What I liked: I like the way each stanza is larger then the last stanza, sort of like the national debt from year to year.

Final Thoughts: This is a thought provoking poem. Write on.

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