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 Follow the Thread Open in new Window. [ASR]
A competition entry. Must contain the words: celebrate, cotton, Christmas, cake, church.
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Review of Follow the Thread  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the cotton thread. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the interaction among the characters because it is natural.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing Christmas story. Write on.

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