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 A Christmas Scene Open in new Window. [ASR]
'Twas the night before Christmas, and not all is as it seems.
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Review of A Christmas Scene  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the fire in the fireplace. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is the description of the tree and the presents. I also liked the twist at the end.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this Christmas story. Write on.

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