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First Thoughts: The ticking of the clock hooked me and I wanted to know what was going to happen. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the way the story ended with just the sound of the clock.

Final Thoughts: This is an exciting story. Write on.

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