A good entry, and you've got me hypothesizing about why her wings were removed. Although you didn't outright say why she was entering at any point in your story, it's easy to get the sense that she wants revenge just from the juxtaposition of the destruction of her world followed by her entering the race. Your opening was unexpectedly intense, and your closing line came out rather clever.

I did notice a few minor technical errors as I read; just little things to watch out for.

"[...]as a member of the royal guard protection the Federation Acknowledged Empress[...]" Royal guard protecting the empress? Royal guard protection for the empress?

Unless a body has been identified as her, current whereabouts should probably be "Missing; presumed deceased."

"[...]no longer alarmed by multi-specie gatherings[...]" You missed an s.

"She fell in line beside it, It's black, square eyes regarded her coldly and it said nothing as the line pressed forward." Looks like you partly re-wrote this sentence, but didn't quite fix it all.

"The woman took only a few seconds to read its contents, the Xulion were not only known for their beauty but for their ability to process and record." A semicolon would work better than a comma here.

"[...]could read some of the contracts contents, included her name, race, and titles[...]" Including, rather than included.

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