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Given: Dec 21, 2013 at 4:41pm
Length: 727 Characters |
637 w/o WritingML
Hello ,
I am reviewing your work as a judge for "CLASH! " [13+]. The following are all my opinions for you to heed or discard as you please.
Character:
What I like: Just the facts. That is all I need to know moving on to the story.
What I'd like to see improved upon: A little over-the-top on the nasty.
Story:
What I like: There is not a lot of extraneous chatter in the narration.
What I'd like to see improved upon: The character has no obstacles to overcome. Everything she does is too easy. I also don't care for present-tense narration.
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