I am reviewing your work as a judge for "CLASH! " [13+]. The following are all my opinions for you to heed or discard as you please.
Character:
What I like:I liike that she is an independent soul with a clear-cut mission in life.
What I'd like to see improved upon: I hate, as a reader, being told how to pronounce a character's name. Slso, there is just too much info that I would rather learn through the narration of the story.
Story:
What I like: I particularly appreciated the conflict between Alexa and Gula. It adds an additional layer to the character.
What I'd like to see improved upon:I was quite bored by the bus ride.
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