I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.
Isn't it funny how a smell will bring memories back to us.
This piece is about a fishing trip.
What does one need?
Some bait.
The lake.
The pole.
A caught fish.
And most of all sharing that special time with someone.
In this case a brother and in our author heart it brings back the sound of their laughter together.
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