so well written. From the beginning, you described the scenes so your reader could almost feel the rough path, the misty air, the sounds of boots cracking leaves. Your description of emotions were so real; allowed your reader to remember her/his smiliar feelings of years earlier when a teenager. You fully described the relationships and feelings, especially those causing your character to know intense feelings for the one she was falling inlove with while acknowledging her sister's place and desire. You described the pain and going in and out of consciousness so well you reader had no doubts.

The personalities of all characters, even the poacher, came through your words of description, of actions, of tone of voice.

A wonderful story that felt so real. I saw no grammatical errors or sentence errors.

(I've just joined Addicted to WDC and am so happy to learn the members are from New ZEaland. From my young adult years when my pastor described his trip to New Zealand among the Mauri people, I have wanted to go there. At my age I know I can't, but I enjoy reading anything about your beautiful country and people. ANN

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .