Hi Fi . I found your item in "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" . Before I begin the review, please note that these are my views as a reader and are not meant to offend in any manner.


Another soldier poem? You are very influenced by the life of soldiers, aren't you?
First of all, I liked the longer version of the poem better. I do not dislike the shorter version, but after tasting the heaven you cannot expect me to compare the mere sky. I loved the images portrayed in every sentence. They make me want to live life with all the love.


Every line flowed perfectly in harmony with the previous and the next sentence. I did not stumble anywhere while reading the poem aloud.


Perfect!


I enjoyed every single line of the poem. They all were so amazing in their description that I'm unable to select one single line as my favorite.


I have read many poems of yours in last few days. I must say that you are a very gifted poet.

Keep Writing!



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