I like the story very much. I like the progress of the romance and the details you put in specifically when Sophia got shot.

I'm so glad you didn't have Stan say those three words. I think knowing how Stan and Sophia meant to each other without having said those words is very impressive, to say the least.

The way you ended the story was also superb.

I just noticed a few technical issues, all of which do not really have an impact to the readers:

> There were instances of a comma following the word "and." I believe we could drop the comma for these cases.

> There were two cases where a certain word got typed twice in a row: "of of" and "mind mind." This also happens to me all the time.

> Finally, I think you meant "furthest" instead of " furtherest."

Again, all minor, no real impact in the story.

This is a very good short story. Thank you for publishing this online. I needed to get exposed to more of these. ^^

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .