Hi Elle

I love that this poem carries such an important environmental and ecological message - I also like the way you added a footnote to your poem about the specific endangered dolphons to New Zealand as I would have had no idea what "Tutumairekurai" meant had you not pointed this out - I think Maori words look so beautiful when written, although I have no idea how this should be pronounced!

I think it is talented - how you have turned this in to a "Double Acrostic" Although as a poem it does not flow quite as well as some of your other pieces Lovely to read however. x