Hello again,

Another interesting and thoughtful poem. I am glad that you included in your description the original bible quote from the parable you refer to. Your piece itself is written with the sort of simplicity that reflects the style of a biblical message. I think it is appropriate that you decide to exclude flair or overly ornamental wording, for the sake of driving home a repeated warning.

I enjoyed your expansion on the parable, and I admire the passion behind your belief in this saying which emanates strongly throughout this piece. Your ABCB rhyme scheme gives this poem something of a sing-song lilt, married with your efforts to consistently write 7 syllables per line. This makes it very readable.

Overall a well-penned write!

Write on!

Wyrd_Naos

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