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 WLTM IRL Open in new Window. [18+]
A vampire uses online dating to find his victims.
by Jeff Author Icon
Review of WLTM IRL  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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hello there, I'm returning an interview. I like how this revolved around a vampire who thought he could use the internet to his advantage but ultimately it led to his demise. you have good imagery, flow, emotional depth and characterization.

You have good outer conflict where the main character is ultimately hunted down by a vampire slayer. good job and write on.
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