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 Does true love exist? Open in new Window. [13+]
Do you really think Love exist in this world of our's
by Adefolahan Bashirdeen Adeyemo Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hi Adefolahan Bashirdeen Adeyemo Author Icon -

As a newer member of this site, I wanted to take a moment to welcome you to Writing.Com. Today is actually my 10th anniversary of being a member here, and I'm celebrating by hosting "SoCalScribe's 10th Anniversary Gala" Open in new Window. and giving away several prizes throughout the day. I've selected you as a recipient of one of 10 reviews I'm handing out today, which also comes with 10,000 Gift Points for you to spend as you please. *Smile*

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WHAT WORKED

*Bullet* I think there's a lot of truth to the attributes to true love that you've listed. This is clearly a well-developed thought and the item really makes the reader stop and think about which of those elements are present in or missing from their own relationships. *Thumbsup*


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

*Bullet* TYPO: "Yes, true love [definitely] exists, but it isn't how most people think it is."

*Bullet* Having two separate numbering schemes in the item was a little confusing. Since you're listing the same thing (attributes of true love), I think you might be better off clarifying them with one cohesive list rather than two separate ones.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, I like the concept of this piece and can tell you put a lot of thought into the content. Combining the two separate lists into one complete list will make things a little more streamlined, but other than that, it was an enjoyable, informative read. Well done!


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