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The Futurist Open in new Window. [ASR]
What A Character! Contest Entry - July 2010
by Jeff Author Icon
Review of The Futurist  Open in new Window.
Review by Noyoki Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

I like the technique of using something we're all familiar with to present a new idea or expand on an existing one in fiction. In this case you used the median of an interview to give the readers a taste of Futurism. It is something I've never heard of before, but after reading this story and your author's note it makes sense.

My Favorite Part:

The little twist at the end. Even the weather men get it right sometime, and Gunther was able to make quite a bit of money off that one little tip. Kiwi, perfect. I love it.

My Suggestions:

One thing that might be fun to see, is to move it to a live studio audience for the show, and have the audience ask a few questions and react to the interview.

Thank you,

~Noyoki

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