Overall Impression:
I picked the same image for the the 30 Day Image Contest. I liked how you used the prompt to describe lightning as a weapon to get justice.

Structure/Form:
You chose Tanka and the poem follows the format. The syllable count is spot on.

Emotion:
You stated this poem was to help deal with emotions from an abusive past. You can feel the anger within the poem, but it has a reason. Poetry is a great tool for letting out emotions and working through them.

Favorite Line(s):
Revenge, best served from heaven.

A perfect line to end the poem.
Suggestions:
The poem is done well as a Tanka poem. It would be nice to make a second version of this poem either free style or Cateno Rondo. This poem could have more of an emotional impact if was longer. This is only a suggestion and you may use it or not, its up to you.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.


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