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30 Day Image Prompt Contest Book Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
A poem that is short and sweet. A haiku that says so much in so little words.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Idea* [Suggestions]
No suggestions that I could pass along that would make this any better than it already is.

*ThumbsUp*[Favorite line]

but baby
boy is all worth it.


*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]

The haiku style is always one that throws me off a bit because a lot of times I just don't know what to say about it. It does intrigue me though. Your poem is only three lines, yet I find it says so much, given the prompt that you were given. I felt you were able to capture the image of the prompt very well in your three line haiku.

Write On!






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