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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CastleLeft*Overall Impression:
I am reviewing this for I Write in..., but I am doing the contest as well so I have a understanding of the rules. You used the prompt in a unique way and created a wonderfull poem. Becoming an adult can change your point of life and remembering to see life like when we were children is a great idea.

*Shield10*Structure/Form:
My guess is free style, but there is a set rhyming scheme that works and it doesn't feel forced.

*Shield6*Emotion:
I love you went into the detail how a child can see the world with all of its wonders and magic.

*Shield1*Favorite Line(s):
The sweet and innocent peek
round each corner; excited,
hopeful and so delighted.

Three beautiful lines!

*Shield3*Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your story and thank your for sharing it.

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