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Review of Winter's Beauty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*CastleLeft*Overall Impression:
I am reviewing this for I write in Jan. Feb. I do like the concept of nature's beauty being ignore by people as we avoid the harshness of winter.


*Shield10*Structure/Form:
It works for me and the rhyming is done well.


*Shield6*Emotion:
Unseen beauty, but that is not an emotion.


*Shield1*Favorite Line(s):
Miserable and dark, it’s beauty unsung;
gaze upon a sparkling moonlit display.

This helps create a beautiful scene in my mind.



*Shield3*Suggestions:

This is a good poem describing what we don't see in winter in nature. I would re-read this and consider if every line add or takes away from a poem.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.




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