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The Greatest Motivator Open in new Window. [ASR]
Winner! WC12/11/12:Use line - It felt like it would be the last time. Based on true story.
by A*Monaing*Faith Author Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
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This story is nice for what it aspires to be. I like the interplay between the two main characters. I have to say that when I first read it, I thought that it was going to be a dialoge between two teenage girls, but when I realized that they were actually more mature women, I was a little surprised that grown women would be acting that way.

I was a little bit puzzled by the phrase, "Contrary to unpopular belief. . ." Is that a double negative meaning that things are exactly the way most people believe them to be?

Wearing glasses myself, I can relate to what narrator goes through when she loses them, although I did want to know more about that dog.

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